Benefits and Challenges of an Internship (2)
Every student, every
future specialist in any field goes through an important and worrying period in
his/her studies, which is called internship. During an internship students of 3rd
or 4th year of study apply acquired knowledge in practice and get
some experience in their profession.
The internship has a lot of benefits
on the one hand, and challenges on the other. Namely benefits and challenges of
an internship will be discussed further.
Probably, the greatest benefit of an
internship is that after it students become more confident in themselves and
their future profession. Studying at University one can doubt if he/she made
the right choice, or think that he/she could not cope with chosen profession.
But little by little, practicing day by day and trying to do all their best
students finally realize that there is nothing frightening and lose fear of
failure.
Moreover there are people who can
help. Interns work with more experienced people who share their experience and
peculiarities of the profession. They point out the mistakes, so that interns
do not repeat them in future. Thanks to their instructions and pieces of advice
interns improve their skills in chosen profession.
Besides improving the skills interns
learn how to act when an unforeseen situation occurs. There are things that
simply cannot be taught at University during theoretical classes and which you
can learn only from your own experience.
To all the enumerated benefits I can
add that an internship is students’ time to demonstrate all their abilities, their
potential and strength. And not to others, but in the first instance, to
demonstrate all these to themselves.
Unfortunately, there are not only
benefits in the internship. As a rule, every student meets some challenges,
too. First one is that some interns are forced to do some other job, which is
not connected with profession. Some leaders of organization, where interns do
the internship solve their own problems. They ask interns to go somewhere, to
bring or to buy something. So, they make students do things which they are not
supposed to do and thus, students do not manage to get enough experience.
Another challenge which probably
bothers most of the interns is that they can hardly apply for a job in the
place where the internship was done. It would be better if there were a chance
to get a job in the organization where you practiced. But the truth is that it
is almost impossible.
In conclusion I can
say that in spite of some disadvantages of an internship every student should
use the chance to do it, because this is
the perfect time to decide whether the
chosen profession is his /her vocation or not.
1st paragraph:
ОтветитьУдалить- ‘THE acquired knowledge’ definite article
2nd paragraph:
- the first sentence should be the last in the first paragraph
- why do you need ‘Namely benefits and challenges…’ I have already told you that it’s not appropriate for the academic style!!!
3rd paragraph:
- what about: ‘is that it helps students to become more confident’????
- ‘and their future’???
- ‘with THE chosen profession’ definite article!!!
- ‘lose + fear’???
- punctuation marks needed in the last sentence!
4th paragraph:
- ‘so that THE intern’
- ‘in THE future’
- ‘THE interns’
- in THE chosen profession’ – I would also use ‘career’
5thparagraph:
- ‘YOU’?????????? Who, me? Whom are you addressing? I have already mentioned this. Be attentive!
6th paragraph:
- ‘THE students’ time’; maybe ‘opportunity’???
- the last sentence to be reformulated!
7th paragraph:
- good point in this paragraph! Just add the right articles where necessary!!!
- the first sentence to be reformulated!!!! I would say simply, ‘Unfortunately, students meet some challenges, too’!!!
- ‘some other job’???
- ‘leaders’?????????
- ‘organization’????????
8th paragraph:
- punctuation marks to be added!
- and again ‘YOU’!!!!!!!!1
9th paragraph:
- ‘or not’ to be avoided!