Benefits and Challenges of an Internship
Every
student, every future specialist in any field goes through an important and
worrying period in his studies which is called internship. Internship is the method
when students apply their knowledge practically. It is an exchange of
experience between a student and organization where he do his practical work. The
internship is accompanied both with benefits and challenges. I would like to
speak about challenges and benefits of the internship from the point of view of
my own experience.
I spent
last four weeks doing my internship as a teacher of French. And I can say that
the greatest benefit of it, in my opinion, is that after the internship students
loose their fear towards the future profession, as it happened to me. Studying at the University one can doubt if he
chose the suitable profession. Such thought as for example “what if I will not
cope with it” probably came to everybody. But little by little, practicing day
by day, trying to do all your best, you finally realize that there is nothing
frightening and become more confident in what you are doing.
Moreover
there are people who help you. So, there comes another benefit – you work with
more experienced people who teach you the peculiarities of the profession. They
share their experience with you, point out your mistakes, so that you don’t
repeat them in the future, and encourage you. Their help and pieces of advice
enrich your knowledge and contribute to your experience in the chosen field.
One more
benefit is that you apply your knowledge in a real-life situation. There are things
that you simply can’t be taught in the University. You will work with real people and there
might happen situations and problems the solution of which you will learn only
working practically.
And
finally, internship is your time to demonstrate all your abilities, all your
potential, all your strength, and not only to others, but in the first instance
to demonstrate all these to yourself.
However, how
it was mentioned in the beginning, the internship has challenges as well. So
far, I can name the one, which bothers me. The internship doesn’t assure that
after graduating you will get a job. The organizations which receive students
as their interns in most cases can’t offer them a job. It would be really good
if you continue to work in the place you practiced. But the truth is that it is
almost impossible and a lot of really well-prepared young specialists remain
without a job.
In
conclusion I can say that in spite of some bad sides of an internship every
student should use his chance to do it, because only during this time he can
apply all knowledge acquired for three or four years in the University and
decide whether the chosen profession is his vocation or not.
Dear Ann, I like your essay so much. I like the ideas and the connection of the paragraphs. Now I understand that my essay is terrible. I/m not sure it's a mistake, but as for me, it doesn't sound well “what if I will not cope with it”.
ОтветитьУдалитьGood luck in everything!
See you tomorrow!
Kate, thank you for encouragement!!!
Удалить1st paragraph:
ОтветитьУдалить- 2nd sentence: in your context it's not a 'method'!!!
- 'practically' not appropriate!!!!!!
- is it an exchange between 'the student and organization'???
- you're being sexist, I'm afraid!!!
- 3rd sentence grammar mistakes!!!
- the internship can't be 'accompanied' - to be reformulated
- 'I would like to speak...' is it appropriate for the written academic style!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
- the last sentence is not good!
2nd paragraph:
- 'benefit of it'!!!!!!!!!
- 'loose'!!!!!!!!
- 'lose their fear towards the future profession' - to be reformulated!
- is 'suitable' the right Adj.???
- the sentence beginning with 'such thought' should be reformulated!!!
- 'YOUR best' whose? mine?
3rd paragraph:
- the benefit does not 'come'!!!!!!
- the transition from one paragraph to the other is not done appropriately
- probably they don't 'teach' but 'share', which means that you should reformulate the sentences so that not to repeat 'share'
- no contractions!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
- the 3rd sentence to be splitted
- they don't 'enrich' knowledge!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
- they don't contribute to 'your experience'!!!!!!!!!!!
4th paragraph:
- 'one more' is this the right connector?
- third sentence to be reformulated!
5th paragraph:
- and finally???????????
6th paragraph:
- however...? the paragraph connection is poorly done
- 'doesn't assure'????????????
- the last sentence to be rewritten!
- a bit incoherent paragraph, you speak about challengeS but you mention only one!
7th paragraph:
- bad sides' - incorrect
- 'for' is this the right preposition?
- should be splitted
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's very difficult to see when one paragraph ends and the other begins! No indention!!!
I understood. Everything's clear. I'll rewrite it. Thank you!
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